Early Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02
review-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02-rtgdir-early-singh-2017-05-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2017-04-28
Requested 2017-03-31
Requested by Jeff Tantsura
Other Reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -02 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Taylor Yu (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Ravi Singh
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02-rtgdir-early-singh-2017-05-08
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/ZTAMZKaUtxYz3Pyo_nihYyj6MFE
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 10)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2017-05-08
Review completed: 2017-05-08

Review
review-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02-rtgdir-early-singh-2017-05-08

Hi
I had been designated as the RTG-DIR reviewer for this draft.
I've reviewed the same.

This draft does a decent job of defining the logical-network-element module.

Some minor comments that should be addressed:
a.       Section 1.1: refers to expired drafts.
b.      Some TBDs need to be populated:
                                       i.            Security considerations section
                                     ii.            An error-code in section 6

Regards
Ravi