Early Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02
review-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02-rtgdir-early-singh-2017-05-08-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
Deadline | 2017-04-28 | |
Requested | 2017-03-31 | |
Requested by | Jeff Tantsura | |
Authors | Lou Berger , Christian Hopps , Acee Lindem , Dean Bogdanović , Xufeng Liu | |
I-D last updated | 2017-05-08 | |
Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Early review of -02
by Martin Björklund
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Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Ravi Singh (diff) Genart Last Call review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Taylor Yu (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Ravi Singh |
State | Completed | |
Request | Early review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 10) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2017-05-08 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02-rtgdir-early-singh-2017-05-08-00
Hi I had been designated as the RTG-DIR reviewer for this draft. I've reviewed the same. This draft does a decent job of defining the logical-network-element module. Some minor comments that should be addressed: a. Section 1.1: refers to expired drafts. b. Some TBDs need to be populated: i. Security considerations section ii. An error-code in section 6 Regards Ravi