Early Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02
review-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02-rtgdir-early-singh-2017-05-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
| Deadline | 2017-04-28 | |
| Requested | 2017-03-31 | |
| Requested by | Jeff Tantsura | |
| Authors | Lou Berger , Christian Hopps , Acee Lindem , Dean Bogdanović , Xufeng Liu | |
| I-D last updated | 2019-03-06 (Latest revision 2018-03-20) | |
| Completed reviews |
Yangdoctors Early review of -02
by Martin Björklund
(diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Ravi Singh (diff) Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Russ Housley (diff) Secdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Taylor Yu (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Ravi Singh |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2017-05-08 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02-rtgdir-early-singh-2017-05-08-00
Hi
I had been designated as the RTG-DIR reviewer for this draft.
I've reviewed the same.
This draft does a decent job of defining the logical-network-element module.
Some minor comments that should be addressed:
a. Section 1.1: refers to expired drafts.
b. Some TBDs need to be populated:
i. Security considerations section
ii. An error-code in section 6
Regards
Ravi