Early Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-22
review-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-20-dnsdir-early-obser-2023-03-07-01

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-19
Requested revision 19 (document currently at 39)
Type Early Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2023-04-09
Requested 2023-03-06
Requested by Jeff Tantsura
Authors Linda Dunbar , Andrew G. Malis , Christian Jacquenet , Mehmet Toy , Kausik Majumdar
I-D last updated 2023-03-27
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -36 by Deb Cooley (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -32 by Magnus Westerlund (diff)
Intdir Early review of -26 by Benson Muite (diff)
Secdir Early review of -22 by Deb Cooley (diff)
Genart Early review of -21 by Paul Kyzivat (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -22 by Susan Hares (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -22 by Ines Robles (diff)
Tsvart Early review of -22 by David L. Black (diff)
Dnsdir Early review of -22 by Florian Obser (diff)
Comments 
Dear colleagues,

RTGWG chairs would like to begin an early review process for the draft.

Thanks,
Yingzhen & Jeff
Assignment Reviewer Florian Obser
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/is3SH0S7G2Zizu8_5M8_-4lMC-4
Reviewed revision 22 (document currently at 39)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-03-27
review-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-20-dnsdir-early-obser-2023-03-07-01
Apologies for the delay in coming back to you. This was due to my
inexperience of the review procedure.

Thank you for the changes, they address all the raised issue.
Unfortunately my requested change introduced a new nit:

| If an organization uses an internal name like .internal and then want
| your services to be available via or within some other cloud provider
| which also uses .internal, then collisions might occur.

should be

| If an organization uses an internal name like .internal and then want
| their services to be available via or within some other cloud provider
| which also uses .internal, then collisions might occur.

i.e. s/your/their/

Florian