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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15
review-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15-tsvart-lc-pauly-2020-06-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-03
Requested revision 03 (document currently at 31)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2020-06-20
Requested 2020-05-29
Requested by Jeff Tantsura
Authors Yingzhen Qu , Jeff Tantsura , Acee Lindem , Xufeng Liu
Draft last updated 2020-06-05
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -12 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -27 by Dan Harkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Francesca Palombini (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -16 by John Scudder (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -15 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -29 by Mahesh Jethanandani (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -29 by Jonathan Hardwick (diff)
Comments
Dear colleagues,

Hope everyone is safe and well!
As RTGWG is preparing for the WGLC for draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model we'd like to ask you to review the draft.

Many thanks!
Jeff & Chris
Assignment Reviewer Tommy Pauly
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15-tsvart-lc-pauly-2020-06-05
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/p1bztLADs1DlBghQcQNp8bacIMg
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 31)
Result Ready
Completed 2020-06-05
review-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-15-tsvart-lc-pauly-2020-06-05-00
This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's
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This document is well-written and concise. From a transport perspective, all
communication of data is handled by existing NETCONF and RESTCONF 
methods for transport (SSH and TLS), as noted in the Security Considerations.