Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-08
review-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-08-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-10-15-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2017-10-04 | |
Requested | 2017-09-20 | |
Authors | Stephane Litkowski , Bruno Decraene , Clarence Filsfils , Pierre Francois | |
I-D last updated | 2017-10-15 | |
Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -01
by Matthew Bocci
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Melinda Shore (diff) Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Linda Dunbar |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Has nits | |
Completed | 2017-10-15 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-08-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2017-10-15-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the operational area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-08 Reviewer: Linda Dunbar Review result: Have Questions. Section 6.1 gives an example of when to use the scheme of the proposed delay: Traffic from G to F: G->D->C->E->F. Your document states: When link C-E fails, if C updates its forwarding entry for F before D, a transient loop occurs. Therefore, "For traffic from G to F, C delaying the update of its forwarding entry to F." Question: For reverse traffic, i.e. from F to G, the primary path is F->E->C->D->G Does it mean that if D updates its forward entry for G before C, a transient loop occurs? Does D need to delay its forwarding entry to G? i.e. C delaying update of its forwarding entry to F, but D delaying update of its forwarding entry to G. How about to other destinations? Does it mean that C & D have to delay its forwarding entry based on destinations? Thank you very much. Linda Dunbar