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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-16
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-16-secdir-lc-lonvick-2023-04-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 24)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2023-05-01
Requested 2023-04-17
Authors Acee Lindem , Yingzhen Qu
I-D last updated 2023-04-29
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Last Call review of -17 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -16 by Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -16 by Chris M. Lonvick (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -21 by Bo Wu (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -03 by Christian Hopps (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Emmanuel Baccelli (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Chris M. Lonvick
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/lcfw1W0TDrAFjkeQ3-f6GuYl70Q
Reviewed revision 16 (document currently at 24)
Result Has nits
Completed 2023-04-29
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-16-secdir-lc-lonvick-2023-04-29-00
Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

First off, I am not a Yang doctor. The summary of the review is Ready with
Nits. I've looked at the reviews of other reviewers and see that they have
covered several details that should be addressed by the authors. I found no
nits or problems on my own.

The Security Considerations section appears to be appropriate and is well
written. I believe that once the authors have addressed the issues raised by
the other reviewers that the document will be ready.

Regards,
Chris