Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2017-12-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-28
Authors Xufeng Liu , Athanasios Kyparlis , Ravi Parikh , Acee Lindem , Mingui Zhang
I-D last updated 2017-12-04
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -01 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Rich Salz (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-12-04
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2017-12-04-00
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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2017-12-04
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary:

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: It would be helpful to add description on why you need
both Tracking Interface and Tracking network. Both of them have the same
description "to detect interface connectivity failures".  What kind of
"connectivity failures" will be reported over the "Tracking Interface"? what
connectivity failures will be reported to "Tracking Network"?

Thanks, Linda Dunbar