Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2017-12-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-28
Draft last updated 2017-12-04
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -02 by Henning Rogge (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -01 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Rich Salz (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Zitao Wang (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2017-12-04
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-12-04

Review
review-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07-genart-lc-dunbar-2017-12-04

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-vrrp-07
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2017-12-04
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-12
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary:

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: It would be helpful to add description on why you need both Tracking Interface and Tracking network. Both of them have the same description "to detect interface connectivity failures".  What kind of "connectivity failures" will be reported over the "Tracking Interface"? what connectivity failures will be reported to "Tracking Network"? 


Thanks, Linda Dunbar