Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sacm-requirements-16
review-ietf-sacm-requirements-16-opsdir-lc-bonica-2017-06-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sacm-requirements
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-06-05
Requested 2017-05-22
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -15 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Barry Leiba (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Ron Bonica
Review review-ietf-sacm-requirements-16-opsdir-lc-bonica-2017-06-19
Posted at https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ops-dir/current/msg02691.html
Reviewed rev. 16 (document currently at 18)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-06-19
Review completed: 2017-06-19

Review
review-ietf-sacm-requirements-16-opsdir-lc-bonica-2017-06-19

Folks,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready for publication

This document defines the scope and set of requirements for the  Secure Automation and Continuous Monitoring (SACM) architecture, data  model and transport protocols. The draft is important.

 I would vote "YES".

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits:

- One outdated reference