Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-08

Request Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-03-16
Requested 2015-03-04
Authors David Waltermire, David Harrington
Draft last updated 2015-03-16
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Alexey Melnikov 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-sacm-use-cases-08-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-03-16
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-03-16


My apologies for the very late review.

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review.

Document: draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2015-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-16
IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09

Summary: Ready

Major Concerns: None

Minor Concerns: None


In Section 2.1.1:

>*  Guidance that specifies how old collected data can be to be
>           used for evaluation.

Either delete "can be" or "to be".