Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09
review-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-04-07 | |
| Requested | 2015-03-19 | |
| Authors | David Waltermire , David Harrington | |
| I-D last updated | 2015-04-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Alexey Melnikov
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Alexey Melnikov (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Warren "Ace" Kumari (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Warren "Ace" Kumari (diff) |
|
| Assignment | Reviewer | Alexey Melnikov |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 09 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2015-04-08 |
review-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08-00
My apologies for the very late review. I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review. Document: draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09 Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2015-04-08 IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-16 IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09 Summary: Ready Major Concerns: None Minor Concerns: None Nits: In Section 2.1.1: >* Guidance that specifies how old collected data can be to be > used for evaluation. Either delete "can be" or "to be".