Telechat Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09
review-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-04-07
Requested 2015-03-19
Authors David Waltermire, David Harrington
Draft last updated 2015-04-08
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -08 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Warren Kumari (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Alexey Melnikov 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2015-04-08

Review
review-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09-genart-telechat-melnikov-2015-04-08

My apologies for the very late review.

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

This review is in response to a request for early Gen-ART review.

Document: draft-ietf-sacm-use-cases-09
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2015-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2015-03-16
IESG Telechat date: 2015-04-09

Summary: Ready

Major Concerns: None

Minor Concerns: None

Nits:

In Section 2.1.1:

>*  Guidance that specifies how old collected data can be to be
>           used for evaluation.

Either delete "can be" or "to be".