Early Review of draft-ietf-savi-mix-11
review-ietf-savi-mix-11-intdir-early-droms-2016-10-17-00

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for <draft-ietf-savi-mix-11>.
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I have one technical issue with the document.  In my opinion, the
document would benefit from a little more detail regarding how the
binding table is used for filtering.  Even a sentence to the effect of
“It is beyond the scope of this document to describe the details of
the filtering mechanism and its use of the combined SAVI binding
table.” would be helpful.

In section 7, I don’t understand “the principle of decision is reasonable”
Can this phrase be reworded for clarity?

The document needs a review for consistency, english language usage
and spelling.    For example, this sentence appears in section3:

   If more than one SAVI method is enabled on a SAVI
   device, the method is referred to as "mix address assignment method"
   in this document.

but the phrase "mix address assignment method" appears nowhere else in
the document.

- Ralph