Telechat Review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll |
|---|---|---|
| Requested rev. | no specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2020-06-23 | |
| Requested | 2020-06-17 | |
| Authors | Annabelle Backman, Michael Jones, Marius Scurtescu, Morteza Ansari, Anthony Nadalin | |
| Draft last updated | 2020-06-22 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Robert Sparks
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Genart Telechat review of -11 by Robert Sparks (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Robert Sparks |
| State | Completed | |
| Review | review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22 | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Iw7rbDXiYteMoj3A5UcOQua-HXA | |
| Reviewed rev. | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
| Review result | Ready | |
| Review completed: | 2020-06-22 |
Review
review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2020-06-22 IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-13 IESG Telechat date: 2020-06-25 Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard My concerns have been addressed. I am a little worried about the Appendix A content of -push - it could be misconstrued to say sending SETs over unencrypted channels is supported by the proposed standard. It would ease my worry if you made this change (again to the -push document): OLD: If SETs are transmitted over unencrypted channels New: If SETs were allowed to be transmitted over unencrypted channels