Telechat Review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2020-06-23 | |
Requested | 2020-06-17 | |
Authors | Annabelle Backman , Michael B. Jones , Marius Scurtescu , Morteza Ansari , Anthony Nadalin | |
I-D last updated | 2020-06-22 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -09
by Robert Sparks
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Robert Sparks (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Robert Sparks |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Iw7rbDXiYteMoj3A5UcOQua-HXA | |
Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2020-06-22 |
review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2020-06-22 IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-13 IESG Telechat date: 2020-06-25 Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard My concerns have been addressed. I am a little worried about the Appendix A content of -push - it could be misconstrued to say sending SETs over unencrypted channels is supported by the proposed standard. It would ease my worry if you made this change (again to the -push document): OLD: If SETs are transmitted over unencrypted channels New: If SETs were allowed to be transmitted over unencrypted channels