Telechat Review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-06-23
Requested 2020-06-17
Authors Annabelle Backman, Michael Jones, Marius Scurtescu, Morteza Ansari, Anthony Nadalin
Draft last updated 2020-06-22
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Robert Sparks 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Iw7rbDXiYteMoj3A5UcOQua-HXA
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 12)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-06-22

Review
review-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11-genart-telechat-sparks-2020-06-22

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Document: draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2020-06-22
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-13
IESG Telechat date: 2020-06-25

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

My concerns have been addressed.

I am a little worried about the Appendix A content of -push - it could be misconstrued to say sending SETs over unencrypted channels is supported by the proposed standard. It would ease my worry if you made this change (again to the -push document):
OLD:
    If SETs are transmitted over unencrypted channels
New:
    If SETs were allowed to be transmitted over unencrypted channels