Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-delta-protocol-06
review-ietf-sidr-delta-protocol-06-genart-lc-levin-2017-03-02-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-01-31
Requested 2017-01-17
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Reviewer Orit Levin
Review review-ietf-sidr-delta-protocol-06-genart-lc-levin-2017-03-02
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/x2Nzui7ZYEjeFmS-ibZdiL8Xu7U
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2017-03-02
Review completed: 2017-03-02

Review
review-ietf-sidr-delta-protocol-06-genart-lc-levin-2017-03-02

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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-delta-protocol-06

Reviewer: Orit Levin

Review Date: 2017-02-13

IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31

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Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication. I only suggest adding the acronym "RRDP" (in brackets) to the title of the document and replacing the expression "this delta protocol" with "RRDP" in 3.1 and 3.2.

Thanks,

Orit.