Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01
review-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-03-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 02) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-02-25 | |
| Requested | 2014-02-13 | |
| Authors | Andrew Newton , Geoff Huston | |
| Draft last updated | 2014-03-03 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -01
by
Francis Dupont
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Vincent Roca (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -01 by Gunter Van de Velde (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Francis Dupont |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-03-03
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| Reviewed revision | 01 (document currently at 02) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2014-03-03 |
review-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-03-03-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140222 IETF LC End Date: 20140225 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None (but some basic concerns were raised during the last call) Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 2 and 5 page 3: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2 page 2: IMHO it should be fine to get CP and CPS in long somewhere to make the document more readable. - Authors' Addresses page 4: US -> USA Regards Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr