Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01
review-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-03-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-25
Requested 2014-02-13
Authors Andy Newton , Geoff Huston
I-D last updated 2015-10-14 (Latest revision 2014-07-04)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -01 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Vincent Roca (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -01 by Gunter Van de Velde (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 02)
Result Ready
Completed 2014-03-03
review-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01-genart-lc-dupont-2014-03-03-00
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Document: draft-ietf-sidr-policy-qualifiers-01.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140222
IETF LC End Date: 20140225
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None (but some basic concerns were raised during the last call)

Nits/editorial comments:
 - ToC page 2 and 5 page 3: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 2 page 2: IMHO it should be fine to get CP and CPS in long somewhere
  to make the document more readable.

 - Authors' Addresses page 4: US -> USA

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr