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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06

Request Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2022-04-29
Requested 2022-04-15
Authors Randy Bush , Rob Austein
I-D last updated 2022-05-01
Completed reviews Tsvart Last Call review of -06 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -06 by Mohamed Boucadair (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Bo Wu (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Bo Wu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bo Wu
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 12)
Result Has nits
Completed 2022-05-01
Hi all,

 I have been selected as the Operational Directorate reviewer for this

Review summary:
I believe this document is "Ready with nits". And it would be better
readability if the draft had added the reason for "obsolete" rather than

comments below:

This draft obsoletes RFC8210 and section 1.2 list the following changes:
1, new sections 5.12 ASPA PDU type
2, section 11 two ROA PDU race conditions
3, The protocol version number incremented  from 1 (one) to 2 (two)
4, the Section 7 has been updated accordingly

- Adds the reason why choosing "obsolete" RFC 8210 instead of "update", since
the protocol version has been updated from 1 to 2 - The title "Protocol Version
Negotiation" to be added to section 7 description. -  Some major changes to
other sections to be added:
   5.1 Flags adds ASPA PDU specific processing
   5.8. End of Data adds clarification text on version 1 changes
   14. IANA Considerations