Early Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-verification-26
review-ietf-sidrops-aspa-verification-26-genart-early-yee-2026-07-20-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-verification |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 27) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2026-07-19 | |
| Requested | 2026-07-07 | |
| Requested by | Jean Mahoney | |
| Authors | Alexander Azimov , Eugene Bogomazov , Randy Bush , Keyur Patel , Job Snijders , Kotikalapudi Sriram | |
| I-D last updated | 2026-08-03 (Latest revision 2026-07-20) | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Early review of -26
by Peter E. Yee
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From the original request made by Luigi Iannone: This document is part of a cluster of documents thightly related, namely: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-profile/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis/ https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-verification/ If possible, it would make sense that the assigned reviewer for this document is willing to review the other two documents. The plan is to have early reviews for all the three documents before IETF 126. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Peter E. Yee |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-verification by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ZKvd_UNYmkP-SNx7ghNPePu-wzk | |
| Reviewed revision | 26 (document currently at 27) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2026-07-20 |
review-ietf-sidrops-aspa-verification-26-genart-early-yee-2026-07-20-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-aspa-profile-27 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 2026-07-19 IETF LC End Date: IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft describes how ASPA objects are used to detect and mitigate certain route leaks and BGP AS_PATH trickery. The document is well written. Given my lack of deep routing knowledge, I can only say I believe it does what’s claimed. There are few minor nits that could be fixed. [Ready with Nits] Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: Page 3, section 1, 1st paragraph, last sentence: change “occur,” to “occur. Page 4, section 4, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: insert “the” before “Provider”. Page 5, 5th paragraph: change “certificate” to “certification”. Page 5, section 5, 2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence: expand “IX” on its first use here. Page 6, 1st paragraph after Figure 2, 6th sentence: delete “that”. Page 6, 1st paragraph after Figure 2, 7th sentence: delete “that”. Page 7, section 5.2, 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence: change “equals” to “is equal”. Page 11, section 7.1, 1st paragraph, last sentence: append a comma after “e.g.”.