Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-tree-validation-02
review-ietf-sidrops-rpki-tree-validation-02-genart-lc-dunbar-2018-08-03-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-tree-validation
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-08-10
Requested 2018-07-27
Authors Oleg Muravskiy , Tim Bruijnzeels
I-D last updated 2018-08-03
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-tree-validation by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 02 (document currently at 03)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-08-03
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Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-tree-validation-02
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-08-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
This draft describes one sample implementation of validating the content of
RPKI certificate Tree. The description is clear, especially clearly described
which section of RFC6487 are based for its implementation.

Major issues:
None.

Minor issues:
None.

Nits/editorial comments:
Section 9.1. the Hash Collisions is more of design in-complete instead of
"Security Considerations". So is the section 9.2 In addition, why the
implementation description has to be an RFC? clog up the RFCs