Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11
review-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11-artart-lc-mahoney-2022-07-20-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
Deadline | 2022-07-20 | |
Requested | 2022-07-06 | |
Authors | Yossi Gilad , Sharon Goldberg , Kotikalapudi Sriram , Job Snijders , Ben Maddison | |
I-D last updated | 2022-07-20 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by Roni Even
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Rtgdir Last Call review of -12 by Acee Lindem (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Sean Turner (diff) Artart Last Call review of -11 by Jean Mahoney (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Jean Mahoney |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/7W9638QiimtKJM89yNhozC6FDTQ | |
Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 15) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2022-07-20 |
review-ietf-sidrops-rpkimaxlen-11-artart-lc-mahoney-2022-07-20-00
I found the draft to be easy to read, and it is ready with just one small issue: The 2119 boilerplate needs to be updated to include RFC 8174, and a normative reference to that RFC needs to be added. (I see the Doc Shepherd review also mentions this.) Nits: s/ad-hoc/ad hoc Title of Section 5.2 should be headline capitalized. There are a few places where there's a comma before "because". Those commas should be removed. Thanks! Jean