Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05
review-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05-genart-lc-dupont-2019-02-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-02-13
Requested 2019-01-30
Authors Roland Jesske
I-D last updated 2019-06-17 (Latest revision 2019-03-15)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -05 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -05 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 05 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-02-12
review-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05-genart-lc-dupont-2019-02-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-sipcore-reason-q850-loc-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20190207
IETF LC End Date: 20190213
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - 1 page 2: expand the ISUP abbrev (note the Abstract is not considered
  as a part of the document body).

 - 5 page 4: i.e. -> i.e.,

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

PS: I checked against Q.850