Telechat Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-15
Requested 2015-12-03
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Matthew Miller (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by DENG Hui (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Matthew Miller
Review review-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-12-genart-telechat-miller-2015-12-16
Posted at
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 15)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2015-12-16
Review completed: 2015-12-16


I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-12
Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
Review Date: 2015-12-16
IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15
IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-17

Summary: ready for publication as a Standards Track document.

I had reviewed the preceding version; that review can be found here:


This vision addressed all my concerns from the previous review.  I have
no other concerns.

Major issues:


Minor issues:


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Matt Miller
Cisco Systems, Inc.




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