Last Call Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14
review-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2017-01-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-01-12
Requested 2016-12-29
Authors Mohamed Boucadair, Jacni Qin, Christian Jacquenet, Yiu Lee, Qian Wang
Draft last updated 2017-01-10
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -12 by Zhen Cao (diff)
Intdir Early review of -12 by Tim Chown (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -14 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -14 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -16 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -16 by Tim Chown (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jouni Korhonen
State Completed
Review review-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2017-01-10
Reviewed rev. 14 (document currently at 18)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2017-01-10

Review
review-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-14-opsdir-lc-korhonen-2017-01-10

I found no issues in this specification (not that I would be an expert in multicast).
IDnits complain about one instance of lines with non-rfc3849-compliant IPv6 addresses. That should be verified whether it actually is an issue.

On the operations side, I am happy with the current deployment considerations section content, and in general how some of the deployment/operational aspects have been laid out in the document.