Last Call Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-11-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-01
Requested 2015-11-03
Authors Yong Cui , Jiang Dong , Peng Wu , Mingwei Xu , Antti Yla-Jaaski
I-D last updated 2016-05-25 (Latest revision 2015-12-19)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by DENG Hui (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2015-11-23
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-11-23-00

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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2015-11-06

IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15

IESG Telechat date: (if known)



Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.



Major issues:



Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments:

-Please consider spelling out all acronyms, e.g. NLRI-NH

-[Page 4], 6.1,"If the software"--?-->"softwire"

-[Page 13], "vulnerability:" --?-->"vulnerability."







Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

Research

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