Last Call Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-11-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-01
Requested 2015-11-03
Draft last updated 2015-11-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Hui Deng (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-11-23
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-11-23

Review
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-11-23






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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2015-11-06




IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15  




IESG Telechat date: (if known)




 




Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.




 




Major issues:




 




Minor issues:




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-Please consider spelling out all acronyms, e.g. NLRI-NH




-[Page 4], 6.1,"If the software"--?-->"softwire" 




-[Page 13], "vulnerability:" --?-->"vulnerability."




 




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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Meral Shirazipour




Ericsson




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