Last Call Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-11-23-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 14) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2015-12-01 | |
Requested | 2015-11-03 | |
Authors | Yong Cui , Jiang Dong , Peng Wu , Mingwei Xu , Antti Yla-Jaaski | |
I-D last updated | 2015-11-23 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by Meral Shirazipour
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Genart Telechat review of -12 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -11 by DENG Hui (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos Pignataro (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Scott O. Bradner (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 14) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2015-11-23 |
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2015-11-23-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-11 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-11-06 IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: -Please consider spelling out all acronyms, e.g. NLRI-NH -[Page 4], 6.1,"If the software"--?-->"softwire" -[Page 13], "vulnerability:" --?-->"vulnerability." Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com