Telechat Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-01
Requested 2015-11-19
Authors Yong Cui, Jiang Dong, Peng Wu, Mingwei Xu, Antti Yla-Jaaski
Draft last updated 2015-11-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Hui Deng (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2015-11-30
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-11-30


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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2015-11-25

IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15 

IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-03


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.


Major issues:


Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 3], 5.1, "of different tunnel is"----->"of different tunnel types is"

-[RFC5640] is added as normative reference by not cited anywhere?



Best Regards,



Meral Shirazipour