Telechat Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2015-11-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-01
Requested 2015-11-19
Authors Yong Cui , Jiang Dong , Peng Wu , Mingwei Xu , Antti Yla-Jaaski
I-D last updated 2016-05-25 (Latest revision 2015-12-19)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by DENG Hui (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Scott O. Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 14)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2015-11-30
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2015-11-30-00

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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2015-11-25

IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15

IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-03



Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.



Major issues:



Minor issues:



Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 3], 5.1, "of different tunnel is"----->"of different tunnel types is"

-[RFC5640] is added as normative reference by not cited anywhere?





Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

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