Telechat Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2015-11-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-12-01
Requested 2015-11-19
Draft last updated 2015-11-30
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Hui Deng (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Carlos Pignataro (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Scott Bradner (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2015-11-30
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 14)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-11-30

Review
review-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2015-11-30






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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2015-11-25




IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15 




IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-03




 




Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.




 




Major issues:




 




Minor issues:




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 3], 5.1, "of different tunnel is"----->"of different tunnel types is"




-[RFC5640] is added as normative reference by not cited anywhere?




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




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