Last Call Review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-06
review-ietf-softwire-yang-06-genart-lc-even-2018-10-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-11
Requested 2018-09-27
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -13 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -13 by Roni Even (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-softwire-yang-06-genart-lc-even-2018-10-09
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/BJI3kgwDDC6CN-YN2jPUC7VuRCQ
Reviewed rev. 06 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-10-09
Review completed: 2018-10-09

Review
review-ietf-softwire-yang-06-genart-lc-even-2018-10-09

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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-10-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 
1. In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network management. why not add restconf to introduction?