Telechat Review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-13
review-ietf-softwire-yang-13-genart-telechat-even-2018-12-29-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-softwire-yang |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 16) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2019-01-08 | |
| Requested | 2018-12-18 | |
| Authors | Ian Farrer , Mohamed Boucadair | |
| Draft last updated | 2018-12-29 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -14
by
Phillip Hallam-Baker
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff) Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Martin Björklund (diff) Tsvart Telechat review of -13 by Michael Tüxen (diff) Genart Telechat review of -13 by Roni Even (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-softwire-yang-13-genart-telechat-even-2018-12-29
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| Reviewed revision | 13 (document currently at 16) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2018-12-29 |
review-ietf-softwire-yang-13-genart-telechat-even-2018-12-29-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2018-12-29 IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11 IESG Telechat date: 2019-01-10 Summary: Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. From my previous review - Ian responded that this will be addressed but I did not see that it was: In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network management. why not add restconf to introduction? 2. In section 2 " The adopts the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)" there is a word missing?