Telechat Review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-13
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Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-01-08
Requested 2018-12-18
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -13 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-softwire-yang-13-genart-telechat-even-2018-12-29
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/aIljF7AYO4vE1WVzirfPpx_1BIs
Reviewed rev. 13 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2018-12-29
Review completed: 2018-12-29

Review
review-ietf-softwire-yang-13-genart-telechat-even-2018-12-29

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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-12-29
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
IESG Telechat date: 2019-01-10

Summary:

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1. From my previous review -  Ian responded that this will be addressed but I did not see that it was:  In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network management. why not add restconf to introduction?
2.  In section 2 " The adopts the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)" there is a word missing?