Telechat Review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang-13
review-ietf-softwire-yang-13-genart-telechat-even-2018-12-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-softwire-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-01-08
Requested 2018-12-18
Authors Ian Farrer , Mohamed Boucadair
I-D last updated 2018-12-29
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Roni Even (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -06 by Martin Björklund (diff)
Tsvart Telechat review of -13 by Michael Tüxen (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -13 by Roni Even (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-softwire-yang by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 13 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-12-29
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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-12-29
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11
IESG Telechat date: 2019-01-10

Summary:

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. From my previous review -  Ian responded that this will be addressed but I
did not see that it was:  In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be
used with netconf , I noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security
section as network management. why not add restconf to introduction? 2.  In
section 2 " The adopts the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)"
there is a word missing?