Telechat Review of draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-20
review-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-20-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-09-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 21)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-09-24
Requested 2013-09-12
Authors Scott Kitterman
I-D last updated 2013-09-20
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -19 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -20 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Secdir Early review of -14 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -19 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 20 (document currently at 21)
Result Ready
Completed 2013-09-20
review-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-20-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-09-20-00

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Document: draft-ietf-spfbis-4408bis-20

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-09-19

IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-02

IESG Telechat date: 2013-09-26



Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have
minor comments.





Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 12], section 3, one line from the example was removed, the text needs to
be adjusted (text is referring to more than one line):

"

The example in this section might be published via these lines in a domain zone
file:

example.com.          TXT "v=spf1 +mx a:colo.example.com/28 -all"

"



-[Page 66], Section E.3., Title, "Receving ADMDs" --typo--> "Receiving ADMDs"





Best Regards,

Meral

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Meral Shirazipour

Ericsson

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