IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-spice-glue-id-04
review-ietf-spice-glue-id-04-genart-lc-hares-2026-02-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spice-glue-id
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 07)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2026-02-10
Requested 2026-01-27
Authors Brent Zundel , Pamela Dingle , Michael B. Jones
I-D last updated 2026-03-05 (Latest revision 2026-03-04)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Susan Hares (diff)
Artart IETF Last Call review of -04 by Patrik Fältström (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -04 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -05 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-spice-glue-id by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/eZqV54g3DKiTBCS24fiv__9nXkY
Reviewed revision 04 (document currently at 07)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2026-02-12
review-ietf-spice-glue-id-04-genart-lc-hares-2026-02-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-spice-glue-id-04
Reviewer: Sue Hares
Review Date: 2026-02-12
IETF LC End Date: 2026-02-10
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:Ready wiht Nits

Major issues: none 

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:

1. NIT 1 - section 7, paragraph 1, sentence 2, Editorial. 

Old text/ The following registration procedure is used for the
   registry established by this specification./

The sentence does not make it clear what paragraphs and/or sections 
are procedures and what sections populate the defined registries 
with values.  J