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Early Review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08
review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2021-06-22
Requested 2021-06-08
Requested by Bruno Decraene
Authors Jim Guichard , Jeff Tantsura
Draft last updated 2021-07-13
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -08 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Mike McBride (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -11 by Stewart Bryant
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Derrell Piper
Genart Last Call review of -11 by Linda Dunbar
Comments
Has passed SPRING WG Last Call (copied to SFC WG) , but would benefit from a larger review.
Assignment Reviewer Dave Thaler
State Completed
Review review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/chK_UKMfbSzEg4XiPByypMud3VQ
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 11)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2021-07-13
review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13-00
Reviewer: Dave Thaler
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments
just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and
resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been
received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>.

Note: I have not been following discussion on the technologies this
document references, but I found the document to be understandable on its own.

I have no technical comments on the document, only a number of editorial
comments which can be found in the PDF at
https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/uploads/prod/2021/07/draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-dthaler.pdf