Early Review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Early Review
Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir)
Deadline 2021-06-22
Requested 2021-06-08
Requested by Bruno Decraene
Authors Jim Guichard, Jeff Tantsura
Draft last updated 2021-07-13
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -08 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Mike McBride (diff)
Has passed SPRING WG Last Call (copied to SFC WG) , but would benefit from a larger review.
Assignment Reviewer Dave Thaler 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/chK_UKMfbSzEg4XiPByypMud3VQ
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 09)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2021-07-13


Reviewer: Dave Thaler
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area
Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments
just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and
resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been
received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see

Note: I have not been following discussion on the technologies this
document references, but I found the document to be understandable on its own.

I have no technical comments on the document, only a number of editorial
comments which can be found in the PDF at