Early Review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08
review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
| Deadline | 2021-06-22 | |
| Requested | 2021-06-08 | |
| Requested by | Bruno Decraene | |
| Authors | Jim Guichard , Jeff Tantsura | |
| Draft last updated | 2021-07-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -08
by
Dave Thaler
(diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Mike McBride (diff) |
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| Comments |
Has passed SPRING WG Last Call (copied to SFC WG) , but would benefit from a larger review. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Dave Thaler |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/chK_UKMfbSzEg4XiPByypMud3VQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2021-07-13 |
review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13-00
Reviewer: Dave Thaler Review result: Ready with Nits I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. Note: I have not been following discussion on the technologies this document references, but I found the document to be understandable on its own. I have no technical comments on the document, only a number of editorial comments which can be found in the PDF at https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/uploads/prod/2021/07/draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-dthaler.pdf