Early Review of draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08
review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 15) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
| Deadline | 2021-06-22 | |
| Requested | 2021-06-08 | |
| Requested by | Bruno Decraene | |
| Authors | Jim Guichard , Jeff Tantsura | |
| I-D last updated | 2021-07-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -08
by Dave Thaler
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Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Mike McBride (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -11 by Stewart Bryant (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Derrell Piper (diff) Genart Last Call review of -11 by Linda Dunbar (diff) |
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| Comments |
Has passed SPRING WG Last Call (copied to SFC WG) , but would benefit from a larger review. |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Dave Thaler |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/chK_UKMfbSzEg4XiPByypMud3VQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 15) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2021-07-13 |
review-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-intdir-early-thaler-2021-07-13-00
Reviewer: Dave Thaler Review result: Ready with Nits I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area Directors. Document editors and shepherd(s) should treat these comments just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have been received. For more details on the INT Directorate, see <https://datatracker.ietf.org/group/intdir/about/>. Note: I have not been following discussion on the technologies this document references, but I found the document to be understandable on its own. I have no technical comments on the document, only a number of editorial comments which can be found in the PDF at https://www.microsoft.com/en-us/research/uploads/prod/2021/07/draft-ietf-spring-nsh-sr-08-dthaler.pdf