Telechat Review of draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-09
review-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-09-secdir-telechat-takahashi-2017-12-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-12-12
Requested 2017-11-01
Authors Ruediger Geib , Clarence Filsfils , Carlos Pignataro , Nagendra Kumar Nainar
I-D last updated 2017-12-11
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Joel Jaeggli (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -06 by Pete Resnick (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Takeshi Takahashi
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 10)
Result Has nits
Completed 2017-12-11
review-ietf-spring-oam-usecase-09-secdir-telechat-takahashi-2017-12-11-00
The issues I have here are very minor.
The security consideration section became better than the 06 version that I
have reviewed before, but I hope the editors could be kind enough to help
reader understand security situation better.

Minor comments:

Regarding this sentence "but it can be used to compromse security in the cse of
external IP domains", what do you mean by "compromise security"? It would be
nice if you could describe what kind of security compromise may happen in order
for the readers to understand the threats more vividly.

Editorial comments:

1. LDP had better be spelled out.
2. "skilled personal": could it be "skilled personnel"?
3. This sentence "As it is necessary to know that the information is
   stale is order to follow the instruction, as is the case with for
   example convergence events that may be ongoing at the time of
   diagnostic measurement." is not easy to understand ofr me. I see some typo
   in this sentence as well.