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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11
review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11-secdir-lc-takahashi-2018-05-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 15)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2018-05-24
Requested 2018-05-10
Authors Ahmed Bashandy , Clarence Filsfils , Stefano Previdi , Bruno Decraene , Stephane Litkowski
Draft last updated 2018-05-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -11 by Tomonori Takeda (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Takeshi Takahashi (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -12 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Takeshi Takahashi
State Completed
Review review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11-secdir-lc-takahashi-2018-05-24
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 15)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-05-24
review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-ldp-interop-11-secdir-lc-takahashi-2018-05-24-00
I have only minor comments.

The section said that security issues in this document are mostly inherited
from the underlying techniques/specs. Some pointers to RFC documents describing
the security issues of MPLS dataplane, routing protocols, and so on (if any)
could help readers. Having these pointers in this section will not harm readers.

Some typo:
In Section 1: "co- exist" (unnecessary space)-> "co-exist"
In Section 2.1: "switches it our" -> "switches it out"

Spelling out is appreciated: LDP and FEC

Clarification question:
Regarding the paragraph "P6 does not have an LDP binding from its next-hop P5
for the FEC "PE1". However P6 has an SR node segment to the IGP route "PE1".
Hence, P6 forwards the packet to P5 and swaps its local LDP-label for FEC "PE1"
by the equivalent node segment (i.e. 101)."(in Section 4.1), I have got the
impression that the behavior of P6 is not defined by any other specs (incl,
LDP) and is a behavior this document newly defines, correct?  If it is correct,
must P6 support this behavior? or is it just optional? I am not familiar with
these routing protocols, thus clarification is appreciated.