Last Call Review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy-14
review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy-14-secdir-lc-schwartz-2021-11-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 22)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2021-11-24
Requested 2021-11-10
Authors Clarence Filsfils , Ketan Talaulikar , Daniel Voyer , Alex Bogdanov , Paul Mattes
I-D last updated 2021-11-23
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -14 by Matthew Bocci (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -14 by Benjamin M. Schwartz (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -16 by Cullen Fluffy Jennings (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -14 by David Schinazi (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -16 by Carlos J. Bernardos (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Benjamin M. Schwartz
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/6BQ3KP3YOzTmsqU2Bic6eU-n9IQ
Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 22)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-11-23
review-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy-14-secdir-lc-schwartz-2021-11-23-00
This document is ready with a few minor clarifications.  It does not seem to
require detailed Security Area review.

Section 2.1
"printable ASCII characters": Needs reference to what qualifies as "printable
ASCII".

"color is a 32-bit numerical value": specify unsigned?

Section 2.4
"represented as a 4-byte number": In what byte order?

Section 9 "Protection": It's not clear who this is protecting from what. 
Possible alternative title: "Recovering from segment failure".