Last Call Review of draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-17
review-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-17-tsvart-lc-kuehlewind-2020-08-18-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team Transport Area Review Team (tsvart)
Deadline 2020-08-26
Requested 2020-08-12
Authors Clarence Filsfils, Pablo Camarillo, John Leddy, Daniel Voyer, Satoru Matsushima, Zhenbin Li
Draft last updated 2020-08-18
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -17 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -17 by Mirja K├╝hlewind (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -17 by Brian Weis (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -19 by Brian Weis
Intdir Telechat review of -18 by Brian Haberman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Mirja K├╝hlewind
State Completed
Review review-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-17-tsvart-lc-kuehlewind-2020-08-18
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsv-art/FRTwpZHB2j1T80MFLEVN1De_9SU
Reviewed rev. 17 (document currently at 19)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2020-08-18

Review
review-ietf-spring-srv6-network-programming-17-tsvart-lc-kuehlewind-2020-08-18

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This review did not identify any transport-related issues.

Nits:
- maybe spell out PE on first occurrence in section 4.8.
- Also maybe spell out BUM in section 4.12 (as well as other abbreviation there). Also shouldn't it be s/BUM/BUM traffic/ ?
- sec 4.13: s/multiple domains. it is one/multiple domains. It is one/
- Would be good to spell out PSP, USP and USD right at the beginning of section 4.16