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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-certificates-15
review-ietf-stir-certificates-15-opsdir-lc-jiang-2017-11-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-stir-certificates
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-11-30
Requested 2017-11-16
Authors Jon Peterson , Sean Turner
I-D last updated 2017-11-26
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Ralph Droms (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Klaas Wierenga (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sheng Jiang
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-certificates by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 18)
Result Has nits
Completed 2017-11-26
review-ietf-stir-certificates-15-opsdir-lc-jiang-2017-11-26-00
Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard stack document describes the use of certificates in establishing
authority over telephone numbers, as a component of a broader architecture for
managing telephone numbers as identities in protocols like SIP. This document
is well written.  It is ready with minor nits.

Major issue: no.

Nits issue:

RFC 8017, RFC 8224 and RFC 8225 are NOT the registered downref.  They are
normative reference to Informational RFCs.

Regards,

Sheng