Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-messaging-06
review-ietf-stir-messaging-06-artart-lc-allocchio-2022-11-02-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-stir-messaging |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 08) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | ART Area Review Team (artart) | |
Deadline | 2022-11-03 | |
Requested | 2022-10-20 | |
Authors | Jon Peterson , Chris Wendt | |
I-D last updated | 2022-11-02 | |
Completed reviews |
Artart Last Call review of -06
by Claudio Allocchio
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Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Bo Wu (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Nancy Cam-Winget (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Claudio Allocchio |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-messaging by ART Area Review Team Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/7hg9Cvxbtn603hgBWj5uFwK52cY | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 08) | |
Result | Ready w/nits | |
Completed | 2022-11-02 |
review-ietf-stir-messaging-06-artart-lc-allocchio-2022-11-02-00
Hello, the ID is essentially a IANA registration of 2 elements, with a good and detailed analysis of applicability scenarios. The only nit suggestion is to reformulate the paragraph where "msg" and "msgi" are introduced into the specification; the current version is: In order to differentiate a PASSporT for an individual message from a PASSporT used to secure a telephone call or message stream, this document defines a new "msg" PASSporT Type. "msg" PASSporTs may carry a new optional JWT [RFC7519] claim "msgi" which provides a digest over a MIME body that contains a text or multimedia message. which does not put in evidence this is a "definition". I would suggest to change it as: A PASSporT for an individual message must be different from a PASSporT used to secure a telephone call or message stream. As such this document defines a new PASSporT Type: "msg" A "msg" PASSporTs may carry a new optional JWT [RFC7519] claim named "msgi" which provides a digest over a MIME body that contains a text or multimedia message. No further suggestions from my side. all the best Claudio