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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-messaging-06
review-ietf-stir-messaging-06-artart-lc-allocchio-2022-11-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-stir-messaging
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2022-11-03
Requested 2022-10-20
Authors Jon Peterson , Chris Wendt
I-D last updated 2022-11-02
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -06 by Claudio Allocchio (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Bo Wu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Nancy Cam-Winget (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Claudio Allocchio
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-messaging by ART Area Review Team Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/art/7hg9Cvxbtn603hgBWj5uFwK52cY
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 08)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2022-11-02
review-ietf-stir-messaging-06-artart-lc-allocchio-2022-11-02-00
Hello,

the ID is essentially a IANA registration of 2 elements, with a good and
detailed analysis of applicability scenarios.

The only nit suggestion is to reformulate the paragraph where "msg" and "msgi"
are introduced into the specification; the current version is:

   In order to differentiate a PASSporT for an individual message from a
   PASSporT used to secure a telephone call or message stream, this
   document defines a new "msg" PASSporT Type. "msg" PASSporTs may carry
   a new optional JWT [RFC7519] claim "msgi" which provides a digest
   over a MIME body that contains a text or multimedia message.

which does not put in evidence this is a "definition". I would suggest to
change it as:

   A PASSporT for an individual message must be different from a
   PASSporT used to secure a telephone call or message stream. As such this
   document defines a new PASSporT Type:

     "msg"

   A "msg" PASSporTs may carry a new optional JWT [RFC7519] claim named

     "msgi"

   which provides a digest over a MIME body that contains a text or multimedia
   message.

No further suggestions from my side.

all the best
Claudio