Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stir-messaging-06
review-ietf-stir-messaging-06-opsdir-lc-wu-2022-11-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-stir-messaging
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2022-11-03
Requested 2022-10-20
Authors Jon Peterson , Chris Wendt
I-D last updated 2022-11-19
Completed reviews Artart Last Call review of -06 by Claudio Allocchio (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Bo Wu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -06 by Nancy Cam-Winget (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Bo Wu
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-stir-messaging by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/2pmfaOnTc5DVQg-1pS6giERZn14
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 08)
Result Has nits
Completed 2022-11-19
review-ietf-stir-messaging-06-opsdir-lc-wu-2022-11-19-00
Reviewer: Bo Wu
Review result: Has Nits

I am the assigned Ops reviewer for this draft. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Sorry for the delay.

Summary:

This document (with intended status Standards Track) describes the
applicability and extension of the Secure Telephone Identity Revisited (STIR)
in the SIP messaging use cases.

Document: draft-ietf-stir-messaging-06

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 3.2: Last paragraph
OLD:
and the timestamp can order mesages displayed to the user
New
and the timestamp can order messages displayed to the user

Section 3.2.1.:
SMPP- It would be nice if it could be expanded on the first use.

Section 4:
OLD
The [RFC8226] STIR certificate profiles defines a way
NEW:
The [RFC8226] STIR certificate profile defines a way

Thanks,
Bo Wu