Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stox-core-07
review-ietf-stox-core-07-genart-lc-romascanu-2013-12-09-00

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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-11
Requested 2013-11-27
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Reviewer Dan Romascanu
Review review-ietf-stox-core-07-genart-lc-romascanu-2013-12-09
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Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2013-12-09
Review completed: 2013-12-09

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review-ietf-stox-core-07-genart-lc-romascanu-2013-12-09

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Document: draft-ietf-stox-core-07
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 12/9/13
IETF LC End Date: 12/11/13
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Summary:
Ready

Major issues:
None

Minor issues:
None

Nits/editorial comments:

1. Please expand XSF at first occurrence
2. It would be good to find some other wording for 'This document inaugurates a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'. For example 'This document provides information for a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'