Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stox-core-07
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Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 12/9/13
IETF LC End Date: 12/11/13
IESG Telechat date:
1. Please expand XSF at first occurrence
2. It would be good to find some other wording for 'This document inaugurates a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'. For example 'This document provides information for a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'