Last Call Review of draft-ietf-stox-core-07

Request Review of draft-ietf-stox-core
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-11
Requested 2013-11-27
Authors Peter Saint-Andre, Avshalom Houri, Joe Hildebrand
Draft last updated 2013-12-09
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -07 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -09 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-stox-core-07-genart-lc-romascanu-2013-12-09
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2013-12-09


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Document: draft-ietf-stox-core-07
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 12/9/13
IETF LC End Date: 12/11/13
IESG Telechat date: 


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Nits/editorial comments:

1. Please expand XSF at first occurrence
2. It would be good to find some other wording for 'This document inaugurates a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'. For example 'This document provides information for a series of SIP-XMPP interworking specifications'