Last Call Review of draft-ietf-suit-mud-06
review-ietf-suit-mud-06-genart-lc-sarikaya-2023-11-12-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-suit-mud
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-11-14
Requested 2023-10-24
Authors Brendan Moran , Hannes Tschofenig
I-D last updated 2025-07-21 (Latest revision 2025-03-03)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -06 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -07 by Michael Richardson (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Tobias Gondrom (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Behcet Sarikaya
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-suit-mud by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/YDbB1YisTUiXdJHaFSx-Wm8t9Ew
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2023-11-12
review-ietf-suit-mud-06-genart-lc-sarikaya-2023-11-12-00
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Document: draft-ietf-suit-mud-06
Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya
Review Date: 2023-11-12
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:This the software libraries contained specification
links Manufacturer Usage Description (MUD) files (similar to Software Bill of
Materials (SBOM) which describes the software libraries contained within the
device)  to SUIT manifests for improving
   security protection and ease of use.
Nits: Sec 3: for example -> for example
Sec 5: CDDL acronym must be expanded and a reference (RFC 8610) given.