Last Call Review of draft-ietf-suit-mud-06
review-ietf-suit-mud-06-genart-lc-sarikaya-2023-11-12-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-suit-mud |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2023-11-14 | |
Requested | 2023-10-24 | |
Authors | Brendan Moran , Hannes Tschofenig | |
I-D last updated | 2023-11-12 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -06
by Behcet Sarikaya
(diff)
Iotdir Telechat review of -07 by Michael Richardson (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -06 by Susan Hares (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Tobias Gondrom |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Behcet Sarikaya |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-suit-mud by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/YDbB1YisTUiXdJHaFSx-Wm8t9Ew | |
Reviewed revision | 06 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2023-11-12 |
review-ietf-suit-mud-06-genart-lc-sarikaya-2023-11-12-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-suit-mud-06 Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya Review Date: 2023-11-12 IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-14 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Major issues:None Minor issues:None Nits/editorial comments:This the software libraries contained specification links Manufacturer Usage Description (MUD) files (similar to Software Bill of Materials (SBOM) which describes the software libraries contained within the device) to SUIT manifests for improving security protection and ease of use. Nits: Sec 3: for example -> for example Sec 5: CDDL acronym must be expanded and a reference (RFC 8610) given.