Telechat Review of draft-ietf-taps-transports-usage-08
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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-09-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-09-14
IESG Telechat date: 2017-09-14
Summary: The document is ready with nits to be published as informational RFC
1. I think it will be better to have the introduction as section 1 and the terminology as section 2
2.In section 3.1 in "open" I did not understand the following sentence "more than TCP's maximum segment size (minus options used in the SYN)"
3. in section 6 "The views expressed are solely those of the author(s)" suggest removing the sentence since this document expresses the views of the WG.
4. A general readability comment when describing primitives in pass 2 the structure is
Pass 1 primitive / event:
but it will be easier to read if there is for example a line space between the paragraphs. look for example at CONNECT.TCP: it is difficult to see where parameters finish and comment starts