Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno-12
review-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno-12-rtgdir-telechat-dimitri-2017-10-29-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 19) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
| Deadline | 2017-10-25 | |
| Requested | 2017-10-09 | |
| Requested by | Alvaro Retana | |
| Authors | Andrea Bittau, Daniel B. Giffin , Mark J. Handley , David Mazieres , Eric W. Smith | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-10-29 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Telechat review of -12
by
Papadimitriou Dimitri
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Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Watson Ladd (diff) Genart Last Call review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -12 by Watson Ladd (diff) Genart Telechat review of -10 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -17 by Watson Ladd (diff) Genart Telechat review of -16 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Comments |
Please focus on any potential impact on routing applications (BGP, LDP, etc.). |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Papadimitriou Dimitri |
| State | Completed Snapshot | |
| Review |
review-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno-12-rtgdir-telechat-dimitri-2017-10-29
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| Reviewed revision | 12 (document currently at 19) | |
| Result | Has Issues | |
| Completed | 2017-10-29 |
review-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno-12-rtgdir-telechat-dimitri-2017-10-29-00
Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno/ As this document is in working group last call, my focus for the review was to determine whether the document has any potential impact on routing applications (BGP, LDP, etc.). Document: draft-ietf-tcpinc-tcpeno-12 Reviewer: D.Papadimitriou Review Date: 28-10-2019 Intended Status: Experimental Summary: I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should be resolved before it is submitted to the IESG. Comments: - May be the document can document if there is any modification for what concerns closing of connections (in its current version the document provides a requirement in Section 5 but no actual procedure) Nits: - Include ref. for Section 3 on Terminology (SYN, ACK, etc.) - Section 4 states " It uses a new TCP option kind " may be worth explaining which *new* kind ? - s/ 4.5. The Negotiated Tep/ 4.5. The Negotiated TEP Thanks, -dimitri.