Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-newcwv-10
review-ietf-tcpm-newcwv-10-genart-lc-even-2015-05-20-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-newcwv
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-05-22
Requested 2015-05-14
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Benjamin Kaduk (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-tcpm-newcwv-10-genart-lc-even-2015-05-20
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg11696.html
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2015-05-20
Review completed: 2015-05-20

Review
review-ietf-tcpm-newcwv-10-genart-lc-even-2015-05-20

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Document:  

draft-ietf-tcpm-newcwv-10

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015–5-20

IETF LC End Date: 2015–5-22

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments:

I am not sure that there is a need for the first sentence in section 1.2

In section 4.4.1 MSS is used but not expanded Maximum Segment  Size (MSS)