Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05
review-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05-genart-lc-brim-2014-06-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-06-30
Requested 2014-06-16
Authors Martin Duke, Robert Braden, Wesley Eddy, Ethan Blanton, Alexander Zimmermann
Draft last updated 2014-06-25
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Scott Brim (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -07 by Scott Brim (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Matt Lepinski (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Scott Brim 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05-genart-lc-brim-2014-06-25
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 08)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2014-06-25

Review
review-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05-genart-lc-brim-2014-06-25

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on




Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at




<

http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/

area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.




Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments




you may receive.




Document: 

draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05

Reviewer: Scott Brim




Review Date: 2014-06-24

IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-30




IESG Telechat date: not yet




Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC.




Nits/editorial comments:

I strongly encourage you to make the title of section 3 be "Strongly Encouraged Enhancements", not "Strong Encouraged". :-)







Scott