Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-undeployed-03
review-ietf-tcpm-undeployed-03-secdir-lc-emery-2016-01-14-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tcpm-undeployed
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-01-18
Requested 2016-01-07
Authors Alexander Zimmermann , Wesley Eddy , Lars Eggert
I-D last updated 2016-01-14
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Christer Holmberg
Secdir Last Call review of -03 by Shawn M Emery
Assignment Reviewer Shawn M Emery
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-tcpm-undeployed by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 03
Result Has nits
Completed 2016-01-14
review-ietf-tcpm-undeployed-03-secdir-lc-emery-2016-01-14-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft designates a number of TCP related RFCs to Historic or Informational
status.  The corresponding RFCs have either been superseded, not widely adopted,
or no longer recommended.

The security considerations section does exist and states that this RFC
does not introduce any new considerations.  The section goes on to say that
any security aspects of the RFC are applicable to the RFCs in question.  I
agree with these assertions.

General comments:

None.

Editorial comments:

s/which which describes/which describes/

Shawn.
--