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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-26
review-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-26-secdir-lc-sahib-2024-06-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 29)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2024-06-06
Requested 2024-05-16
Requested by Jim Guichard
Authors Young Lee , Dhruv Dhody , Daniele Ceccarelli , Igor Bryskin , Bin Yeong Yoon
I-D last updated 2024-06-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -25 by Behcet Sarikaya (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -24 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -28 by Susan Hares (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -26 by Shivan Kaul Sahib (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -26 by Bo Wu (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -22 by Darren Dukes (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -10 by Andy Bierman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Shivan Kaul Sahib
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/bOGlWPc16kSLSjpfZUtS_3LWpkM
Reviewed revision 26 (document currently at 29)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-06-06
review-ietf-teas-actn-vn-yang-26-secdir-lc-sahib-2024-06-06-00
I found the descriptions of sensitive data nodes in Security Considerations
useful. I'm sure they'll be helpful to implementers.

nit: In Security Considerations, "Therefore, many security risks such as
malicious attack and rogue elements attempting to connect to various ACTN
components." is incomplete.

nit: in Introduction, "Abstraction and Control of Traffic Engineered Networks
(ACTN) describes a set of management and control functions used to operate one
or more TE networks to construct Virtual Network (VN) that can be represented
to customers and that are built from abstractions of the underlying TE networks
[RFC8453]" reads awkwardly. Also "TE" is not defined before being used (it's
defined in the reference).