Early Review of draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-06
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Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-06
Requested revision 06 (document currently at 10)
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Deadline 2024-04-30
Requested 2024-03-17
Requested by Vishnu Pavan Beeram
Authors Daniel King , John Drake , Haomian Zheng , Adrian Farrel
I-D last updated 2024-05-26
Completed reviews Rtgdir Early review of -06 by Tony Przygienda (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Alvaro Retana (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Joe Clarke (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Comments 
This is a Post WGLC review request; 06 version addresses all the comments that were raised during WGLC
Assignment Reviewer Tony Przygienda
State Completed
Request Early review on draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing by Routing Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtg-dir/oar2lYywDDXSGkQIIUmCvYrM8yM
Reviewed revision 06 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-05-25
review-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing-06-rtgdir-early-przygienda-2024-05-26-00
Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.

Document:  draft-ietf-teas-applicability-actn-slicing
Reviewer: Tony Przygienda
Intended Status: Informational

*Summary:*

In short, the draft has been a pleasure to read. It is well structured,
informative and carefully laid out presenting actually a good overview of
the whole network slicing & service modelling jungle of drafts so overall,
time well spent for me ;-)

*Comments:*

Only thing to remark is that the draft references a lot in-flight drafts in
section 4 and given that, after publication the ground may move and it may
lose relevance to an extent. I do not consider that likely.

*Major Issues:*

*None*

*Minor Issues:None*

*Nits:*

Polished, easy on the eye language, nothing sprung out.