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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-fast-lsps-requirements-01

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-fast-lsps-requirements
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 02)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-09-30
Requested 2015-09-17
Authors Andrew G. Malis , Brian J. Wilson , George Clapp , Vishnu Shukla
Draft last updated 2015-09-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -01 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -01 by Sam Hartman (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter E. Yee
State Completed
Review review-ietf-teas-fast-lsps-requirements-01-genart-lc-yee-2015-09-28
Reviewed revision 01 (document currently at 02)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2015-09-28
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Document: draft-ietf-teas-fast-lsps-requirements-01
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Sep-28-2015
IETF LC End Date: Sep-30-2015
IESG Telechat date: Sep-30-2015

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational
RFC, but has a nit that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with

The draft discusses requirements that apply to the expedited setup of
GMPLS LSPs in scenarios that may have high churn.  The text can be a bit
dense in the descriptive sections, but the requirements are easily

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None


Page 2, Section 1, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: delete the commas
following “setup” and “blocking”.

Page 3, 1st partial paragraph, 1st full sentence: change “set up” to

Page 3, 2nd full paragraph, 1st sentence: delete “intends to”.  Change
“present” to “presents”.

Page 3, Section 2, 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: append a comma after

Page 3, Section 2, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: delete the comma after

Page 4, Section 3, item 2, 1st sentence: change the first “setup” to “set

Page 4, Section 3, item 2, 3rd sentence: delete “a” before “packet-only”.

Page 4, Section 3, 2nd paragraph after items, 2nd sentence: append a comma
after “e.g.”.

Page 5, Section 4.1, 1st paragraph: change the space after performance to
a hyphen.

Page 5, Section 4.1, 1st item: change “rate” to “rates” and both
occurrences of “request” to “requests”.

Page 6, Section 5, 3rd sentence: delete “be”.

Page 6, item R3: insert “the” before “number”.

Page 7, item R8: append a comma after “e.g.”.