Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02
review-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2015-02-17-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2015-02-18 | |
| Requested | 2015-02-05 | |
| Authors | Cyril Margaria , Giovanni Martinelli , Steve Balls , Ben Wright | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-02-17 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -02
by
Francis Dupont
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -04 by Francis Dupont (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -02 by Kiran K. Chittimaneni (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Kiran K. Chittimaneni |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2015-02-17
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| Reviewed revision | 02 (document currently at 05) | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2015-02-17 |
review-ietf-teas-lsp-attribute-ro-02-opsdir-lc-chittimaneni-2015-02-17-00
Hi, I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This document defines an extension to the RSVP ERO and RRO objects to allow it to specify or record generic attributes which apply to a given hop Summary: This document is ready with nits Section 3.2.1. Second sentence has the word 'in' repeated twice. idnits throws some warnings that should be looked at Regards, KK