Last Call Review of draft-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label-10
review-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label-10-genart-lc-bryant-2017-12-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-12-29
Requested 2017-12-15
Other Reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -06 by Acee Lindem (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Stewart Bryant
Review State Completed
Reviewer Stewart Bryant
Review review-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label-10-genart-lc-bryant-2017-12-28
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/fg9-1OmdaCLW9qIB0WIvQqO7AVA
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2017-12-28
Review completed: 2017-12-28

Review
review-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label-10-genart-lc-bryant-2017-12-28

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Document: draft-ietf-teas-network-assigned-upstream-label-10
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-12-28
IETF LC End Date: 2017-12-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-01-11

Summary: A clear will written document. Ready for publication.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: Not an issue with the design per se, but there is a school of thought that says do not use all zeros or all ones in a protocol without good reason since these are common uninitialized variable values. If the designers have scope to do so they might consider picking another value.

Nits/editorial comments: 

Slightly strange order of final sections. Most readers will want to look at IANA and Security rather than worrying about the contributors.