Telechat Review of draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04
review-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04-genart-telechat-davies-2017-08-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2017-08-29 | |
| Requested | 2017-08-10 | |
| Authors | Adrian Farrel , Quintin Zhao , Zhenbin Li , Chao Zhou | |
| Draft last updated | 2017-08-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -03
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Thomas Morin
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Genart Last Call review of -03 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Tianran Zhou (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Matthew A. Miller (diff) Genart Telechat review of -04 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04-genart-telechat-davies-2017-08-28
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| Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2017-08-28 |
review-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04-genart-telechat-davies-2017-08-28-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-teas-pce-central-control-04 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2017-08-28 IETF LC End Date: 2017-08-24 IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-31 Summary: Thanks for addressing my Last Call comments on -03. The new version is ready with one introduced nit. Also I am still of the abstract is somewhat overlong. Nit: s6, para 2: The SDN term 'northbound' has appeared in the new version. Needs brief explanation. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: