Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-09-07-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
Deadline | 2018-09-07 | |
Requested | 2018-08-24 | |
Authors | Yuanlong Jiang , Xian Liu , Jinchun Xu , Rodney Cummings | |
I-D last updated | 2018-09-07 | |
Completed reviews |
Intdir Early review of -07
by Dave Thaler
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Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff) Genart Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Samuel Weiler (diff) Genart Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff) Yangdoctors Early review of -10 by Radek Krejčí (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Sheng Jiang |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang by Ops Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 09 (document currently at 11) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2018-09-07 |
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-09-07-00
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This standard trick document defines a YANG data model for the configuration of IEEE 1588-2008 devices and clocks, and retrieval of the configuration information, data set and running states of IEEE 1588-2008 clocks. This document is well written. It is clear from the YANG validation tools. It is ready to be published though I am not expert on YANG or IEEE 1588-2008 to give review from technology perspective. Major issue: no. Minor issue: no. Regards, Sheng