Last Call Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-09-07-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2018-09-07
Requested 2018-08-24
Other Reviews Intdir Early review of -07 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Samuel Weiler (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -10 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Sheng Jiang
Review review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-09-07
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/SHH8mu5VqHB8OlN49C-9h7ay8nA
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-09-07
Review completed: 2018-09-07

Review
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09-opsdir-lc-jiang-2018-09-07

Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments
were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF
drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD
reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat
these comments just like any other last call comments.

This standard trick document defines a YANG data model for the configuration of
 IEEE 1588-2008 devices and clocks, and retrieval of the configuration information,
data set and running states of IEEE 1588-2008 clocks.

This document is well written. It is clear from the YANG validation tools. It is ready
to be published though I am not expert on YANG or IEEE 1588-2008 to give review
from technology perspective.

Major issue: no.

Minor issue: no.

Regards,

Sheng