Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10-genart-telechat-dunbar-2018-09-21-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-09
Requested 2018-09-20
Other Reviews Intdir Early review of -07 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Samuel Weiler (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -10 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Linda Dunbar
Review review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10-genart-telechat-dunbar-2018-09-21
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/4lyJ143__foXdddCzg33ZX8T9Go
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-09-21
Review completed: 2018-09-21

Review
review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10-genart-telechat-dunbar-2018-09-21

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Document: draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-09-21
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11

Summary:

The updated revision (10) has addressed all my comments to the draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09. 
Thank authors for updating the draft promptly. 

Linda

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