Telechat Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10

Request Review of draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-10-09
Requested 2018-09-20
Authors Yuanlong Jiang, Xian Liu, Jinchun Xu, Rodney Cummings
Draft last updated 2018-09-21
Completed reviews Intdir Early review of -07 by Dave Thaler (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Sheng Jiang (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Samuel Weiler (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Yangdoctors Early review of -10 by Radek Krejčí (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Review review-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-10-genart-telechat-dunbar-2018-09-21
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2018-09-21


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Document: draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-??
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2018-09-21
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11


The updated revision (10) has addressed all my comments to the draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09. 
Thank authors for updating the draft promptly. 


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